作文在雅思考試中占有較高的分數也是比較難的一部分，下面是小編為大家整理的雅思考官看了想的雅思寫(xiě)作開(kāi)頭，希望各位考生引以為戒。 　　1 　　中式英語(yǔ) 　　用中式英文開(kāi)頭，不僅會(huì )讓考官看不懂，還暴露了你的語(yǔ)言功底，語(yǔ)料積累匱乏，是雅思寫(xiě)作中的大忌。比如： 　　寫(xiě)作主題：The happiest moment in your life 　　案例：In our life, there are always some moments whichmake your heart flower opened angrily… 　　寫(xiě)作主題：The population problem 　　案例：The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always seepeople mountain people seathere. 　　2 　　胡亂翻譯俗語(yǔ) 　　胡亂翻譯俗語(yǔ)會(huì )起反作用，畢竟考官對俗語(yǔ)并不“感冒”，使用不慎，更會(huì )引起考官反感。比如： 　　寫(xiě)作主題：Is it good to have a large family? 　　案例：I think it is good to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe a sentence:“Many sons, many lucks”… 　　寫(xiě)作主題：Do you think one’s character is greatly influenced by his/her family? 　　案例：Chinese old words says very good:Dragon born dragon, phoenix born phoenix, rat’s son can make hole… 　　3 　　敘事啰嗦 　　開(kāi)篇要主題清晰，上來(lái)啰啰嗦嗦表達不清，考官自然認為你的觀(guān)點(diǎn)模糊，甚至不會(huì )表達。比如： 　　寫(xiě)作主題：Should college students be allowed to get married? 　　案例：This topic is veryinteresting. I’m veryinterested intalking about this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married…… 　　寫(xiě)作主題：Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information? 　　案例：Ok, this topic is a very good topic. First,let me tell you a story:I have a friend, he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses internet to read news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life.

　　4 　　偏離主題 　　文不對題自然會(huì )扣分，給考官留下的印象就是跑題，想想整體寫(xiě)作分數還會(huì )高么？比如： 　　寫(xiě)作主題：It is said that nowadays one can‘t acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? 　　案例：I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English, music tools, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places. 　　5 　　觀(guān)點(diǎn)不明朗 　　雅思大作文很重要的一點(diǎn)就是你的邏輯性和觀(guān)點(diǎn)，如果觀(guān)點(diǎn)都不明確，后面的舉例證明等都會(huì )缺乏說(shuō)服力，自然分數也不會(huì )高。比如： 　　寫(xiě)作主題：Should college students be allowed to get married? 　　案例：I think this topicis very hard to say. Because I am still very little,only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……