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sat小知識:
類(lèi)別一必備素材一:從失敗到成功的故事
典型例題
Can something unsuccessful turn into something good?
例子重點(diǎn):失敗的細節-略加過(guò)渡-成功的細節學(xué)生范文
Point: Very true is the saying that failure can teach us a lot.
Illustration: Last year, I participated in the election of the president for the student union.
Although I thought I had performed confidently, convincingly and calmly, I did not acquire the position.
(營(yíng)造失敗)Later,I realized that I merely concentrated on the personal manner, emotional expressions,eye contact with listeners and other intangible elements while I did not propose concrete and practicalideas to operate the student union effectively.(營(yíng)造過(guò)渡)After recognizing my deficiency, I felt that Ibecame more intelligent and mature despite the unsuccessful experience.(營(yíng)造成功)Explanation: Consequently, it is the good thing of meaningful and valuable enlightenment that arises from unsuccessful things
范文點(diǎn)評:本文語(yǔ)言精練,基本結構清晰,但是這個(gè)素材非常缺乏細節。硬傷是成功這個(gè)點(diǎn)的營(yíng)造。他寫(xiě)道:“我覺(jué)得我變得更聰明,更成熟?!钡菍?shí)際情況是,這樣的闡述算不上成功的細節,因為這只是作者內心的想法,并不是事實(shí)。
基本評分:8-9分
引申話(huà)題
Is memory a help or a hindrance in helping us learn from the past and succeed in the future?
這是官方樣題里的一個(gè)話(huà)題,因為配有滿(mǎn)分范文。所以拿出來(lái)讓考生借鑒一下。
題目翻譯:在大家認識過(guò)去和獲得成功的過(guò)程中,記憶是幫助還是阻礙?
題目分析歸類(lèi):某些考生可能已經(jīng)發(fā)現.其實(shí)這個(gè)題目本質(zhì)上就是從失敗到成功的故事。因為記憶可以營(yíng)造成一段失敗的經(jīng)歷--從中學(xué)到了經(jīng)驗-進(jìn)而成功。
例子重點(diǎn):memory--失敗的經(jīng)歷--learn from the past從過(guò)去中學(xué)到了經(jīng)驗--help幫助自己一succeed in the future后成功
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